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Thursday, 8 September 2016


Once upon a time there were 5 people on the ship they all ran out until they saw a island they saw people but it was zombies eating people we saw someone behind the tree we went to save him from the zombies there was a big zombie we ran to the ship and got the guns and then we started to shoot all the zombies we went to the next island there was a zombie Lion and  Tiger they ate all the people now there are zombie Sharks we killed all the zombies but the zombie tiger and lion ran after us we all got on the ship and went home.
The end.    

By abraham
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5 comments:

  1. Moira8 September 2016 at 10:49

    Hi Abraham, I really enjoyed reading your story and helping you pick pictures. Next time, try to put a capital letter for your name.

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  2. Anonymous8 September 2016 at 10:51

    Hi Abraham,I am really impressed of what you did i noticed that you are getting better in your writing!

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  3. Roseena 8 September 2016 at 10:52

    Good Writing Abraham and I liked the pictures. Next time don't repeat words in all your sentences.

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  4. Anonymous8 September 2016 at 10:55

    Hi Abraham I really like the way you made your work look nice and the just to tell you, you need a Capital letter to star your title

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  5. Anonymous9 September 2016 at 10:15

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